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Mariofan9
Joined: 15 Oct 2007
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 Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 1:58 pm
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Hey, thanks for all the constructive critique!  Really useful!  I'll try to keep all of it in mind.
Since I got some attention I'll show you another of my drawings.
It's a Midna-Goombella mix or something. Please do not tell me it scares you. :p I prefer to hear exactly what about it is correct or incorrect. |
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The Inconspicuos Intruder
X-Naut, Johnston
Joined: 26 Jun 2007
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Those sprites will haunt my dreams forever....
On a serious note, there is no denying that they are very well sprited. However, the arms and the head look disproportionate to the rest of the body. |
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Mariofan9
Joined: 15 Oct 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:35 pm
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| X-Naut, Johnston wrote: | Those sprites will haunt my dreams forever....
On a serious note, there is no denying that they are very well sprited. However, the arms and the head look disproportionate to the rest of the body. |
Thank you. Midna has crazy body proportions and I tried to put that in this drawing. |
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Nastasia
Joined: 13 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:13 pm
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| Mariofan9 wrote: | | X-Naut, Johnston wrote: | Those sprites will haunt my dreams forever....
On a serious note, there is no denying that they are very well sprited. However, the arms and the head look disproportionate to the rest of the body. |
Thank you. Midna has crazy body proportions and I tried to put that in this drawing. |
Midna's body proportions are different than a normal human's, but that doesn't mean you can screw up the body totally....Midna's arms aren't that long or thick, and her hands aren't like a monkey's. The hands are a lot smaller than that. Yeah, I really seriously suggest using reference pictures......so you don't totally mess up the anatomy. |
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Burn them out
rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:16 pm
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| Mariofan9 wrote: | Hey, thanks for all the constructive critique! Really useful! I'll try to keep all of it in mind.
Since I got some attention I'll show you another of my drawings.
It's a Midna-Goombella mix or something. Please do not tell me it scares you. :p I prefer to hear exactly what about it is correct or incorrect. |
OH GOD WHAT IS THAT THING!?
KILL IT! BURN IT! |
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Tails Doll
Joined: 04 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:37 pm
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I think I need REAL glasses now... |
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Typhoon
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 6:32 pm
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| Mariofan9 wrote: | Hey, thanks for all the constructive critique! Really useful! I'll try to keep all of it in mind.
Since I got some attention I'll show you another of my drawings.
It's a Midna-Goombella mix or something. Please do not tell me it scares you. :p I prefer to hear exactly what about it is correct or incorrect. |
The only problem I see is short legs, long arms.
They don't mix.
Edit: And the bottom of the chin. Its... not shaded. |
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Mariofan9
Joined: 15 Oct 2007
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:31 am
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| Nastasia wrote: | | Mariofan9 wrote: | | X-Naut, Johnston wrote: | Those sprites will haunt my dreams forever....
On a serious note, there is no denying that they are very well sprited. However, the arms and the head look disproportionate to the rest of the body. |
Thank you. Midna has crazy body proportions and I tried to put that in this drawing. |
Midna's body proportions are different than a normal human's, but that doesn't mean you can screw up the body totally....Midna's arms aren't that long or thick, and her hands aren't like a monkey's. The hands are a lot smaller than that. Yeah, I really seriously suggest using reference pictures......so you don't totally mess up the anatomy. |
I thought her arms are the right length when they are as long as her body... oh well. I'm sure you're correct about the hands, I messed up those... But for the rest, I thought the drawing was reasonable. |
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Flavio
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 8:34 am
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The majority of your drawings lack ROMANCE! THRILLS! EMOTION! and MONEY! Especially the Midna one. Though, the ParaGoombas do look okay. |
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Nastasia
Joined: 13 May 2007
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 2:49 pm
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| Mariofan9 wrote: | | Nastasia wrote: | | Mariofan9 wrote: | | X-Naut, Johnston wrote: | Those sprites will haunt my dreams forever....
On a serious note, there is no denying that they are very well sprited. However, the arms and the head look disproportionate to the rest of the body. |
Thank you. Midna has crazy body proportions and I tried to put that in this drawing. |
Midna's body proportions are different than a normal human's, but that doesn't mean you can screw up the body totally....Midna's arms aren't that long or thick, and her hands aren't like a monkey's. The hands are a lot smaller than that. Yeah, I really seriously suggest using reference pictures......so you don't totally mess up the anatomy. |
I thought her arms are the right length when they are as long as her body... oh well. I'm sure you're correct about the hands, I messed up those... But for the rest, I thought the drawing was reasonable. |
Well, I just looked at some pictures of Midna, and her arms don't go down all the way to her feet....they go almost down to her knees. |
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Jolene
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| Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 6:38 pm
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To be honest, most of them are really ugly.
Except for the pink Paragoomba at the bottom of the first post.
I wanna hug it. D: |
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Luigi's Lucky Star!!
paperluigi
Joined: 26 Jul 2007
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Paragoombas are awsome!! |
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Mariofan9
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| Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 3:59 am
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Well, thank you guys for all your critique! Both positive and negative, it helps. I'll improve and perhaps sometime later I'll try to make some better stuff. In the meantime, please keep giving critique. I rarely got it before I got on this forum.
Oh, and please, please do not react if you can't say anything but ''good'' or ''bad''. |
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