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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 22614
HP: 65 MP: 6 Lives: 0
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 Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:02 am
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Untitled:
Watch the seconds tick away,
Nothing left to say.
No matter how you say it, you're leavin' me.
(chorus)
The years of my life I have given to you,
The pain that I face tryin' to plow right through,
All the hearts that you broke, keepin' me entranced,
Now you're just stabbing mine with a giant lance.
(repeat)
(end chorus)
Twelve O' three, I'm just laying in bed,
Thoughts rushing through my head,
Wonderin' how you lived that lie.
It's like a bullet that never leaves,
In aching pain I bleed
Clear blood from my eyes.
I can't believe I stayed,
Praising all you say,
Now all the beauty just washed away.
(chorus)
You left me the cruelest way,
Amid the lives you say
Deserve you more then I.
You're just making it crystal clear,
You hate the men that fear
The beast that's deep inside.
(chorus)
No matter how you say it,
No matter how you say it,
No matter how you say it, you're leaving me crushed.
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Larry Koopa
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:04 am
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eherm.
all you need is a tune. |
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Addicted to linebreaks
Plastic Mario
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Joined: 11 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:06 am
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| Altair wrote: | eherm.
all you need is a tune. |
I was going to make a detailed post, but this kinda sums it up for me. |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 22614
HP: 65 MP: 6 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 10:08 am
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| Plastic Mario wrote: | | Altair wrote: | eherm.
all you need is a tune. |
I was going to make a detailed post, but this kinda sums it up for me. |
Eh, "song" was probably the wrong word. I couldn't think of a better word to describe it. |
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I don't have a title.
Gold Prognosticus
Joined: 02 Oct 2007
Posts: 2182
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 11:26 am
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| TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | Plastic Mario wrote: | | Altair wrote: | eherm.
all you need is a tune. |
I was going to make a detailed post, but this kinda sums it up for me. |
Eh, "song" was probably the wrong word. I couldn't think of a better word to describe it. |
Sounds more like a rap than a song. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
Joined: 30 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:49 pm
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EMO.
CRAAAWWLING IN MY SKIIIIN |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:55 pm
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| Francine wrote: | EMO.
CRAAAWWLING IN MY SKIIIIN |
I was wondering when you'd say that. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 2:56 pm
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Actually, now I'm thinking of what could've been your inspiration for this. And I think I know what it is. |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:11 pm
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| Francine wrote: | | Actually, now I'm thinking of what could've been your inspiration for this. And I think I know what it is. |
Surprisingly enough, no. I mean, it may have been a subconscious inspiration, but I didn't mean that to be an inspiration. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:12 pm
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| TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | Francine wrote: | | Actually, now I'm thinking of what could've been your inspiration for this. And I think I know what it is. |
Surprisingly enough, no. I mean, it may have been a subconscious inspiration, but I didn't mean that to be an inspiration. |
omfg ur turnin ful on emo |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:48 pm
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| Francine wrote: | | TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | Francine wrote: | | Actually, now I'm thinking of what could've been your inspiration for this. And I think I know what it is. |
Surprisingly enough, no. I mean, it may have been a subconscious inspiration, but I didn't mean that to be an inspiration. |
omfg ur turnin ful on emo |
So what if I am? |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
Joined: 30 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:49 pm
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| TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | Francine wrote: | | TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | Francine wrote: | | Actually, now I'm thinking of what could've been your inspiration for this. And I think I know what it is. |
Surprisingly enough, no. I mean, it may have been a subconscious inspiration, but I didn't mean that to be an inspiration. |
omfg ur turnin ful on emo |
So what if I am? |
I'll lend you my eyeliner. |
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Burn them out
rawrskey
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Joined: 03 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 3:50 pm
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Not reading.
But if it makes you feel any better, good job for attempting to make another useless "song" that will never make it in the world. |
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