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Djacwmwfin
Joshamuffin
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Joined: 12 Jun 2007
Posts: 3539
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 Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:12 pm
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Yay for foreshadowing. Always works if done correctly. |
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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
Posts: 14262
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:47 pm
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| Joshamuffin wrote: | | Yay for foreshadowing. Always works if done correctly. |
Meh.
I might continue this later. For now, I want to start a new story. |
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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:01 pm
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| Quote: | I managed to get back to sleep at 9:47 PM, and woke up at exactly 5:43 AM for no apparent reason. The voice had stopped counting, but I felt very... strange. I had this strange feeling that perhaps part of my brain had gone on vacation without telling the other part that everyone experiences at one point in time or another. I was laying face-down on the floor for no apparent reason then, wondering where an entire 2/3 of my brain had gone and why it went without me. Just about that time, the floor started floating away from me.
"Hey, come back here, I need you!" I screamed at it as it went further away. Soon I flipped around as if by some magical force, and saw the ceiling was sinking away as well... sinking up.
"What, do I have bad breath or something?" I asked the ceiling. It was about that time that everything suddenly went white, and I was standing in front of a man with a bullet wound in his chest, screaming very loudly at me. At this point in time, it's very important for you to know that time is, as I have told you, immeasurable in the afterworld... and I had visited it. At the time, of course, I had not known, but that's aside the point. Soon, a white man with a white beard that made him seem almost completely invisible, almost like a floating face off in the distance, started walking -- or rather HOVERING -- towards me and the screaming man. The man had stopped screaming at this point and began to cry.
"Have I gone insane!?" I asked nobody in particular.
"Incorrect" said the man.
"So I'm sane?" I asked him.
"Incorrect" he replied.
"So then... what am I?" I asked.
"Incorrect" he said. I simply stared at him, and he apparently thought this to be a stare of confusion.
"Incorrect" he stated once more. Okay, I thought, this man is indeed strange. He may be a very intelligent man, and I am indeed incorrect, he may be a very stupid man and I may or may not be correct, or he may just be a man who likes saying the word "incorrect" over and over.
"Incorrect!" he screamed at me. Soon after that, his face fell off and he split into about a dozen different pieces and they all ran around.
"Fun." I said out loud, almost sarcastically, and sat down on the whiteness... somehow magically spawning a cup of coffee and drinking from it. |
Not so boring and depressing now, is it? |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 22614
HP: 65 MP: 6 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 4:47 pm
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| Quote: | | "What, do I have bad breath or something?" |
I would totally ask my ceiling that if it floated away from me.
Nice addition, good to see it's starting to pick up. Insanity-equseness is always fun. |
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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
Posts: 14262
HP: 70 MP: 5 Lives: 5
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 2:54 pm
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I apologize if I sound rude, but could some mod clean up all the rather spammy posts made by anyone (including me) that don't relate to my story somehow? It's bothering me.
| Quote: | When I woke up I was surprised to find that I was still in an entirely white room. There were two people in white standing in front of me, one a man, one a woman. The door behind them had a red cross on it. "Oh, I'm just in a hospital," I thought to myself, and when I tried to say it out loud, it came out as something along the lines of "Aruff aroof ruff arf arf ruff".
"Aroo!?" I exclaimed... though I had honestly been hoping for something along the lines of "what" to come out of my mouth. Just then, the woman started stroking my back. Not to say it didn't feel good, because it did, it just felt a bit odd to have her doing this... and while I was distracted by all this, the man put some sort of contraption on my head. For some reason, I felt urged to speak... as if something had crawled down my throat and was coaxing the wind in my voice box to go ahead and do what it does best.
"What did you... oh! I can speak again!" I said out loud.
"Calm down, Kane, we're just testing something on you..." the man said.
"Who's Kane?" I immediately responded.
"You," said the doctor, "are Kane. Please, allow us to ask you some questions."
"Wait a minute, wait a minute... ask ME questions? I'm far more confused than you might be. Plus I have a woman distracting me by stroking my back," I said. She stopped. "Excuse me, what did you put on my head just now?"
"Ah... just a new device." the man said.
"Well let me see it then! Go get a mirror or something," I said. He did. I saw. And I was completely shocked and baffled. "Wha...?" I asked.
"I'm glad you're amused by it," he said.
"No... not that mangled piece of junk you put on my head... I'm... covered in fur! I'm a WOLF!" I stated out loud, with, what I would like to say, authority.
"You mean, you just know realized you're a wolf...?" he asked me.
"Well yes! I just woke up, and for the past five minutes, I hadn't even known where I was, much less that I was a WOLF! Just yesterday I was sitting at my kitchen table, eating food, with my hands, my HUMAN hands, covered in SKIN, not FUR! This is ridiculous! What have you done to me!?" I screamed out loud. I was, as you might be able to tell, quite agitated.
"You... what? Huh?" asked the man. He seemed more baffled than me, which is something I found to be quite an accomplishment, because I was significantly confused. I tried to stand up, and blundered about for a while until the floor decided to jump at me and hit me very hard in the jaw. What a rude thing for the ground to do... but I didn't have time to comment on the ground's rudeness before everything decided to go black on me. |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
Vampire
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
Posts: 22614
HP: 65 MP: 6 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 3:22 pm
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| rawrskey wrote: | | I apologize if I sound rude, but could some mod clean up all the rather spammy posts made by anyone (including me) that don't relate to my story somehow? It's bothering me. |
Sorry, I forgot to do that.
Wolf? Reminded me of Okami. |
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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
Posts: 14262
HP: 70 MP: 5 Lives: 5
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| Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2007 3:25 pm
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| TotalSpaceshipGuy3 wrote: | | rawrskey wrote: | | I apologize if I sound rude, but could some mod clean up all the rather spammy posts made by anyone (including me) that don't relate to my story somehow? It's bothering me. |
Sorry, I forgot to do that.
Wolf? Reminded me of Okami. |
I can only imagine what kind of hell this is going to bring to me.
Tards: HAHA YUO LIEK FURREHS (or something along those lines. It's not true, by the way.)
Furfags: OMFG HAWT
Tons of other people: THIS SOUNDS JUST LIKE (insert name). |
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Djacwmwfin
Joshamuffin
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Joined: 12 Jun 2007
Posts: 3539
HP: 100 MP: 5 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 1:08 pm
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Tasty. Oh btw, now I have only one harry pothead left to go. Just you wait until I get my slimy little paws on it. Oh yes, and it changed the way I type for awhile. |
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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
Posts: 14262
HP: 70 MP: 5 Lives: 5
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| Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 1:25 pm
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I want to write so many things down, but I seem to not really want to. Feh.
I guess I'll just sort out the rest of the plot in my head for now... I might write over the amazingly long weekend. |
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