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Nastasia
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 Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 9:59 pm
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(Somebody delete this topic, please. >__>)
Last edited by Nastasia on Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:15 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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hai
Spiny
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:09 pm
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| Nastasia wrote: | 
Yes, it's probably obvious, her username is Sweet Skitty. She's a member at an Oekaki that I'm also a member of. If any of you saw it, she made some fanart of my character Sparky, so I decided to make her some fanart too. And now there's this picture.
Comments and crits welcome. |
That is almost as shiny as the picture of Sparky. |
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Sync
MALAK
Joined: 01 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:48 pm
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Boobz *killed* |
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RAPEFACE BUTLER MODE
Kii
Joined: 27 May 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 10:51 pm
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HOLY SPARKLES. I love the brightness and the pink 8D
Her body looks a little too wide, but I'm afraid to redline it because I'm not that good at animal anatomy myself. But I could try if you'd like, since it's difficult to explain what I think stands out... |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:08 pm
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| Kii wrote: | HOLY SPARKLES. I love the brightness and the pink 8D
Her body looks a little too wide, but I'm afraid to redline it because I'm not that good at animal anatomy myself. But I could try if you'd like, since it's difficult to explain what I think stands out... |
Please try to explain, because I'm a little confused about what you mean by that... |
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Poison
Super Postman
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Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:18 pm
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-thumbs up-
ya did good I like |
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RAPEFACE BUTLER MODE
Kii
Joined: 27 May 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 11:30 pm
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| Nastasia wrote: | | Kii wrote: | HOLY SPARKLES. I love the brightness and the pink 8D
Her body looks a little too wide, but I'm afraid to redline it because I'm not that good at animal anatomy myself. But I could try if you'd like, since it's difficult to explain what I think stands out... |
Please try to explain, because I'm a little confused about what you mean by that... |
Hmm.. The best I can do to explain it is that I think her chest/stomach comes down a little bit too low. Like, the two halves of her body on either side of her front leg don't look like they connect to each other.
I drew some lines over to try to explain...
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8610/sweetskittybluelineszb2.png
The lighter blue line is an indication of her bust XD; I figured you would know how to draw that better than me since you know the character.
But don't think I hate the picture or anything... I think it looks excellent otherwise. I really love your coloring style and your details  |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:06 am
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Looks like a perugly ( I'm terrible at Pokemon names, so don't kill me if I did that wrong ) gone pretty. x3
If it's suppose to be fat TELL THE PERSON TO GIVE IT LYPO xD
If it's suppose to be skinny, but fluffy, then maybe you should work on making the hair more hair like.
And if it's suppose to be skinny and short haired than you have done a horrible job to catch the character. xDDD
But the colouring is nice, and the sparkles. *w* |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
Vampire
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:36 am
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o_o |
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Djacwmwfin
Joshamuffin
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| Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:39 am
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Does that thing have breasts? |
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