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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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 Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:58 pm
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2 years after Flavio's birth, there was enough R!T!E!&M! to create Flavio's brother Petio. However the radiation from Flavio had soured down and thus Petio is half lime.
One day Petio created the Wii and then created Sakurai, God himself, Petio told him to make Brawl.
When Petio heard that
Jesus had stolen Flavio's thunder, he ordered that the Jews kill him ,and they did Btw, but they got posessed and so Petio made the Sword of Chapstick! Shoes! Apples! and Toilet Paper! of PetioOWNING! And killed them all thus sending them to Hell, which angered the Devil, and started the 69 year war, which was ended by Flavio. |
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MALAK
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:06 pm
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:10 pm
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It ties in with Flavio's life as well you fluttering mongoose. |
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Popple
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:15 pm
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No. You aren't good at mature humor.
And I should know. |
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Bremmy
R. S. Buzzy
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:16 pm
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Flavio's story had depth. Your story, sir, is a sham of a mockery of a bamboozlement. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:34 pm
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| Petey Piranha wrote: | | It ties in with Flavio's life as well you fluttering mongoose. |
Also it's filler for stuff Flavio left out. |
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Popple
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:43 pm
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Petey, it isn't *crag* good.
AT ALL.
All you did was use every single joke Flavio has ever used and shoved them into a text document. Hell, it isn't even a paragraph long. |
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Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:49 pm
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| Popple wrote: | Petey, it isn't *crag* good.
AT ALL.
All you did was use every single joke Flavio has ever used and shoved them into a text document. Hell, it isn't even a paragraph long. |
Then *crag* delete it then asshole. |
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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:58 pm
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| Petey Piranha wrote: | | Popple wrote: | Petey, it isn't *crag* good.
AT ALL.
All you did was use every single joke Flavio has ever used and shoved them into a text document. Hell, it isn't even a paragraph long. |
Then *crag* delete it then asshole. |
*chorus of angels* |
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Popple
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:58 pm
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| Petey Piranha wrote: | | Popple wrote: | Petey, it isn't *crag* good.
AT ALL.
All you did was use every single joke Flavio has ever used and shoved them into a text document. Hell, it isn't even a paragraph long. |
Then *crag* delete it then asshole. |
So I can't have an opinion? Even if I am being harsh, a criticism is a criticism. |
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MALAK
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 7:59 pm
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| Petey Piranha wrote: | | It ties in with Flavio's life as well you fluttering mongoose. |
;~; |
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Tails Doll
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:27 pm
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It's not all that long. And it lacks content and depth. I want more sentences. I want more action. I want more depth. |
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Shadowlugia
INeedScissors61
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| Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 8:38 pm
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I'm sorry, but although it lacked gooderness... it was still much gooder than Flavio's... |
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