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Gummysquid
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 Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:02 pm
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More color experimenting.
Doodled Paper Mario characters.
Critique welcomed. (but please don't focus on anatomy, I'm seeking color crit.) |
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bobz
bobzearth42
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Er, a black background wasn't really the smartest move. It would be more clear with a white background, but whatever. The color doesn't really blend together. Plus, the anatomy looks good to me. 3:|════׀ |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:19 pm
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| Mao wrote: | | Er, a black background wasn't really the smartest move. It would be more clear with a white background, but whatever. The color doesn't really blend together. Plus, the anatomy looks good to me. 3:|════׀ |
Yeah, the black was a slip-up, I started out with it, tried to revert it to white- I made the rest of the picture slip lighter because of the oppacity, and I was too lazy to fix it. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:19 pm
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I don't suggest shading with colours that are just the darker version of the base. It makes the drawing look plan and boring. Also saturated highlighting still bothers me. :( |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:22 pm
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| Frozenwinters wrote: | I don't suggest shading with colours that are just the darker version of the base. It makes the drawing look plan and boring. Also saturated highlighting still bothers me.  |
I just can't resist that color dodge  |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 8:26 pm
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| Gummysquid wrote: | | Frozenwinters wrote: | | I don't suggest shading with colours that are just the darker version of the base. It makes the drawing look plan and boring. Also saturated highlighting still bothers me. :( |
I just can't resist that color dodge :oops: |
That my fave too with eyes. :) |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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I like it a lot, actually. The black background is epic. It looks like a chalkboard drawing. Very Yoshi's Island/Yoshi's Story-ish! |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:02 pm
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| Geno wrote: | | I like it a lot, actually. The black background is epic. It looks like a chalkboard drawing. Very Yoshi's Island/Yoshi's Story-ish! |
Haha, thank you! Seems like most people don't like the black, though  |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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| Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:06 pm
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| Gummysquid wrote: | | Geno wrote: | | I like it a lot, actually. The black background is epic. It looks like a chalkboard drawing. Very Yoshi's Island/Yoshi's Story-ish! |
Haha, thank you! Seems like most people don't like the black, though |
It's unique as hell. I'd say stick with it, in my honest opinion. Not many people work with a black "canvas". |
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LudwigVonKoopa
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I personally can't think of anything bad to say. |
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