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Sawhit Threwit!
MarioMario
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Joined: 14 Jul 2007
Posts: 275
HP: 20 MP: 0 Lives: 0
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 Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 2:06 am
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Prologue
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FWOOP Fwoop fwoop....
Parakarry: Mail Call!
FWOOP FWOOP FWOOP
Luigi: *walks out of door, gets mail, goes back* Yo, Mario! We got mail. I'll read it for ya.
~ Dear Mario....~
In recent travels, I found a rustic and simply eccentric town called Rougeport. While there, I came across a map....... yada yada.... Crystal Stars......
-Peach.
TO BE CONTINUED[/i] |
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The Embodiment of Awesome
Bowser Jr.
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Joined: 21 Jul 2007
Posts: 1158
HP: 55 MP: 0 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 6:54 am
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Bwa ha ha ha! Don't ya think it's a bit too short? Seriously, I could kick a red shell more times back and forth before I missed than the amount of words in that story part! |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
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Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 6855
HP: 1 MP: 7 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:19 am
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At first I thought you were trying to tell something to me...  |
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Sawhit Threwit!
MarioMario
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Joined: 14 Jul 2007
Posts: 275
HP: 20 MP: 0 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:50 pm
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Sorry 'bout that. t'was late and I had to sleep.
Anyway....
Prologue -continued-
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Luigi: So you're gonna go on another adventure eh, Mario?
Mario: *jumps* Yah!
Luigi: C'mon, bro lemme go with you this time.
Mario: Hmm... *shakes head* ....
Luigi: Well I'll just be here if you need any help.
Mario: *nods and goes to warp pipe to Toad town ferry*
Luigi: ... *sigh* Ah well. Gonna go make a parfait now.
Parakarry: *knocks on door* Sorry, Luigi but I forgot to give you this one letter.
Luigi: Eh? *opens door and read letter*
~Dear Mario or Whoever his brother is~
Our fair princess Eclair has been kidnapped by the feared Evil Chestnut king and we desperately need your help. Please come as fast as you can.
Sincerely, Cakesworth
Luigi: Mario's not here so... I WILL SAVE HER and stuff.. *quickly writes note regarding how to make his parfait and goes to Toad town's other seaport.*
-Meanwhile-
Crump: What the crud guys! You let that moustchioed man go with that girl!
Steve(the x-naut everyone forgot about): I'll go...
Luke: I'll get 'im sir.
Crump: Nevermind that Luke, but I admire your dedication. Steve, you should be more lke Luke.
Steve: But...
Crump: Anyway.. We have to find that map! (or Grodus wil kill me)...
To be continued. |
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Noble Swordsman
Meta Knight
Joined: 02 Jun 2007
Posts: 1493
HP: 100 MP: 4 Lives: 1
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 1:00 pm
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It looks to be interesting, but keep it with the Luigi's story. You are kinda straying into the Paper Mario TTYD part with Mario. |
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Cid
Lord Krump
Joined: 21 Apr 2007
Posts: 7880
HP: 60 MP: 2 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 1:08 pm
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This looks interesting, and it looks like it has potential. It looks like it's going to get good.
Buh huh huh. And I thought I wasn't going to be in it. |
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Sawhit Threwit!
MarioMario
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Joined: 14 Jul 2007
Posts: 275
HP: 20 MP: 0 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 5:24 pm
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Now for the continuation!
Prologue pt.3
Luigi: Now... TO BUSYNESSES! Where the heck is that ferry?
Toadsworth: Erhem, may I suggest..
Luigi: Quiet, Toadsworth! I'm trying to find a ferry!
Toadsworth: .... Ah well, I WAS gonna point you to.
Luigi: *grabs and shakes toadsworth* WHERE DANGIT! I MUST SAVE THE DONUT... Eclair.... thingie..... Princess....
Toadsworth: *points to left*
Luigi: Thanks! *runs off*
Toadsworth: Luigi wait, I......
Luigi *boards the ferry*
Toadsworth: ... He's done for. Note to self, think of titles for Luigi's memoir.
---- The next day ----
Luigi: zzz... Oh pastrami.... Oh Rigatonni.... Oh Fetuchini... zzz...
Captain: Master Luigi! We're here! WAKE UP!!!!!
Luigi: What! I'm not undressing you with my mind!!!!!
Captain: 
Luigi: I mean we're in the Waffle Kingdom?
Captain: Uh... Yessir.
Luigi: Okay then. BACK TO ADVENTURE.
T.B.C
Found the reference yet?
Last edited by MarioMario on Tue Jul 31, 2007 11:37 am; edited 1 time in total |
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The book
Light Prognosticus
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Joined: 22 Apr 2007
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HP: 88 MP: 10 Lives: 2
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| Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:01 pm
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Do I smell a Stuffwell quote. It doesn't matter. BACK TO ADVENTURE! |
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